As a class we, once again evaluated our openings group by group. I am extremely pleased as our teacher has given us an A grade (provisional) because camera work was excellent, editing was generally good and we worked in a good location with good choices regarding mise-en-scene. As a group we circled the classroom leaving 3 significant positive and negative points on an A3 sheet of paper, in full ours were as follows:
+good tilt shot
-last 10 seconds wasent as smooth, in terms of editing
+ good POV shot
+ music was alot better and much more engaging
+ pace of editing with music and narrative worked really well , editing was generally really good.
- narrative was a little slow and not engaging
+ effective tilt
+ smooth transitions (editing)
+ good variety of shots, kept audience engaged
+ good choice of location
- font of titles could of been better
+ steady camera work
In addition to this, the points that could be improved are the last 10 seconds could be improved, narrative was a little slow and un engaging and font titles could have been better. For even more peer assesment i set up a facebook group as it is easy to access and can reach a wide range of people (the target audience) the link is: http://www.facebook.com/home.php?ref=home#/group.php?gid=73724238731&ref=nf
an example of a facebook comment:
Furthermore, as an individual i feel that i have improved greatly within organisation, camera and in some aspects editing. These factors will help me within A2.
