We edited and showed our filming so far to our media teacher. In addition to this, we need much more filming (we only have a minute at the moment). Also, the establishing shot needs to be longer to introduce the setting properly, the main character needs a stronger sense of narrative whilst receiving the phone call telling him to run, more sounds dialogue is needed, a more subtle introduction of the other character (the 'tracker'), we need to show more obviously that time has passed to increase the sense of realism, the camera needs to tell more of a story, we need to make the editing less jumpy, the location needs to be slightly altered, reduce jumping back and forth between characters, show andy perhaps making a call, have a stronger sense of dual narrative and most importantly camera work needs to be vastly improved.
Furthermore, we have set a date for further filming- 4th March. Three of our group members will be present and the two actors, we are going to be working on improving these points and our coursework.
I have found the order in which the opening titles will be shown and have taken them into account with the other group members, at a later date we will attend an after school class to improve our knowledge of photoshop and other programmes to make our titles on.
First rough cut clip:
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